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| Traveling to Bariloche |
The best
holidays I've ever had were when I visited Bariloche, Argentina. It was when I
was 16 (in 2013). First, I consider Bariloche a magic place, or more than place,
the experience of traveling there, because traveling to that place you can
appreciate how long is Chile (from Santiago to Bariloche are about 15-20 hours
of travel, it depends of the custom house and the traffic), even from the
center to the south, you can see various southern towns until Temuco, its
natural characteristics like volcanos, hills, mountains, forests (that looks
like The Lord of the Rings, I love it).
The second
great feature of Bariloche is its people, the vast majority are very friendly,
warm and hospitable persons, habitants who
receive you with open arms and caters very well both a restaurant and a
bookshop for example.
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| Summit of Cerro Campanario |
The third amazing
feature of Bariloche is its landscapes and activities you can do there, totally
outdoors, like sailing with paddle boats on rivers, climb famous hills of the
area, whose view is beautiful because on top of the hills (specifically Cerro Campanario) you can see countless lakes both Chile and Argentina. And if
you did not do outdoor activities (at night for example), you could see the
village, its green areas, fairs, streets, shops, restaurants, etc. But the
non-outdoor activity that I most remember it was when I danced Tango with a
very sexy Argentinian woman.
These three reasons are
truly amazing and make Bariloche a famous and magnificent place to visit,
100% recommended to have an unforgettable holiday.
Hi Migue <3!
ResponderEliminaryour vacations sounds really fun!! I didn't know that the trip was sooooo long, when I visit Bariloche I stops in many places in the route
I had one suggestion for you, maybe you can connect the ideas in a more natural way and not just enumerate it, you are funnier than this!
Javi you are an angel in the earth <3
EliminarOh my god Miguel, what a nice place! I've never been there (but I really want to) I can imagine you like Frodo running through the grassland...Nice post.
ResponderEliminarI have a suggestion for you good man: when you describe the village I think it's better use the connector "with" [green areas,fairs]
Bless brodahh
Thanks Caye for your comment c: and your fix
EliminarJAJAJJAJAJAJAJ Frodo XD
Bless sistah
I see you in another life sister
Hello Miguelin
ResponderEliminarNice places to visit, and really you have had a very funny hollidays ( I like the lord of the rings too)
Good redaccion, but a suggested, you need join better your ideas
Thanks for your comment James :D and I'll keep that in mind Carbonelson.
EliminarI see you in another life brother
The best holidays I've ever had were when I visited Bariloche, Argentina. (TS)
ResponderEliminarIt was when I was 16 (in 2013).
First, I consider Bariloche a magic place, or more than place, the experience of traveling there (SS1)
, because traveling to that place you can appreciate how long [2)is 1)Chile] (from Santiago to Bariloche THERE are about 15-20 hours of travel, it depends (of) ON the custom’S (house) and the traffic), EXPLANATION
(even UNNECESSARY) from the center to the south, you can see various southern towns until Temuco, its natural characteristics like volcanos, hills, mountains, forests (that looks like The Lord of the Rings, I love it). EXPLANATION
The second great feature of Bariloche is its people, (SS2)
the vast majority are very friendly, warm and hospitable persons, INhabitants who receive you with open arms and (caters very well both a restaurant and a bookshop for example) [CONFUSING…CATER?). EXPLANATION
Summit of Cerro Campanario (DO NOT WRITE TITLES IN THE MIDDLE OF A PARAGRAPH)
The third amazing feature of Bariloche is its landscapes and activities you can do there, totally outdoors, (SS3)
like sailing with paddle boats on rivers, climb famous hills of the area, whose view is beautiful because on top of the hills (specifically Cerro Campanario) you can see countless lakes both Chile and Argentina. (EXPLANATION)
And if you did not do outdoor activities (at night for example), you could see the village, (SS4)
its green areas, fairs, streets, shops, restaurants, etc. But the non-outdoor activity that I most remember it was when I danced Tango with a very sexy Argentinian woman. (COMMENT)
These three reasons are truly amazing and make Bariloche a famous and magnificent place to visit,
100% recommended to have an unforgettable holiday.(CONCLUDING SENTENCE)
Miguel, a fine piece of writing, good motivating description, just work a bit more on its edition and it’ll be perfect. Congrats. Just remember not to separate a paragraph into paragraphs. You want a solid single unit.